Well, I will give you credit on the lure. The clear Tiny Torpedo is my favorite top water lure.
Did I forget to give you those lock back swivels? If you insist on using a swivel at least use a good one.
I also noticed you didn't bend the barbs down on the hooks... well at least if you hook yourself lipping bass there are a bunch of good looking "doctors"
right there in the "village".
